Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many young children in some countries are living as boarders and many believe this could be the trend in the times to come. In my opinion, parents should consider raising their children under their own tutelage and send them to schools only as day pupils before 18 before allowing them to move away only for higher education.
To begin with, parents can only have a greater empathy towards their children and can accommodate their needs in a better way at home. Although warden of the school hostel might be trained in child psychology, students' guardians are in a better position to understand the needs of their children as they grow. Moreover, teens are not able to relay their feelings more openly to their teachers. For example, children tend to share their emotions, vulnerabilities and weaknesses with their fathers and mothers because of their reciprocal love and filial piety. Furthermore, children need to experience the nature of affection and bond they can have with their siblings at home which would go amiss while at school.
Secondly, children are more likely to learn the right behaviour and develop a good conduct in homely environment under the guidance of their parents than left on the mercy of teachers at school. Studies suggest young people relate to their parents and other immediate family members while learning to respond to social situations and they often copy them in their mannerisms. On the other hand, students who are admitted as full-time students often seem to lose way in the want of right counselling and good advice. Take for example, the rising concern of teenage addiction to drugs and alcohols. this is partly due to absence of good parentage in childhood.
However, some people tend to argue that children cannot learn to be independent if they stay at home. this is chiefly because some parents are overprotective and pamper their whims which sometimes can spoil children. In this respect, parents should allow space for self-development in order for them to think for themselves and make good decisions on their own.
In conclusion, parents should not consider assigning their children entirely to the care of schools. By attending schools as day pupils, children can draw a better response from parents for their needs and learn ethical and moral aspects for behaving well and responsibly for themselves and others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08974358974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58599500216 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4387203235 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106777816779 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422927069485 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345231917445 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700465508033 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349979078506 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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