Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Attaining higher education has been a necessary requirement to many professionals’ field, such as law and medicine. Mandating younger generation to maintain as full-time students up to the age of 18 years old has been a source of controversy. Some believes this has advantage and, on the other hand, some do not identify this as a necessity.
In current culture, people with tertiary education would be able to find a job with a sustainable and considerable salary and with notable success become an inspiration to others, as an example, being a doctor to save lives. Many parents influence such cognition whilst children are young.
Learning through classroom environment may not suit everyone. As observed for centuries, many learnt from practical skills including cookery, art and music and more. Some may find learning from books difficult, yet their creatively sense may see them successful in career such as hair stylist or their highly physical skills supporting to be a firefighter. Number of influential people nowadays, including Steve Jobs founder of Apple Inc, Lee Ka Sing founder of Sun Hung Keng, where both owned profitable businesses well known to the World, do not possess a degree. Practical and craft skills are as important as theoretical. Education do not ensure success career path only equipping children to identify their interests and finest skillsets.
Whilst, professionals could enhance economic and financial growth in todays’ environment, it cannot be achieved with blue collar workforce. I believe encouraging younger generation to live and pursue their ambitions, no matter becoming a doctor or a chef, are more beneficial and imperil the imbalance of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41947565543 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04278477477 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1762726818 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163487162943 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475605464893 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512848633462 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942915099622 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648473357905 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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