Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be solved. Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Women in current era gradually becoming more career focus when compare to the past. An increasing trend shows professional women would find difficulty in striking the balance between work and home. In this short essay, I shall use my own experience to name a few possible means to maintain work-life balance.
Nowadays we would see a fair working environment between male and female, providing a good opportunity for women to be successful. Yet, on the downside, attention to family matter may see plummet (for example, upkeep of chores). Sense of responsibility both at home and at work, would increase the stress level experienced and emotional effects may draw back to family and friends.
It is essential to recognise a way to reduce pressure and more effectively handle both work and personal issues. Time-management would be one key factor, planning the day ahead with a diary with set timeframes will help with forming regularities in life. Unexpected events may occur and disrupt the planned activities; however, panic will not resolve the issue, taking a deep breath, refocus and going back to the diary to rearrange tasks will be an alternative means in keeping motivated. Exercising one other means to reduce tension as endorphin is released to uplift emotion, such as yoga and meditations are well known for stress relieve and spiritual focus.
Being one of modern professional women, I personally find the above solutions work best supporting a healthy and stable life without the need to be in constant pressure. Mental awareness is significantly important, and the well-being of ones should be taken seriously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun possible seems to be countable; consider using: 'few possibles'.
Suggestion: few possibles
...I shall use my own experience to name a few possible means to maintain work-life balance. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21673003802 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88035801386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665399239544 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8012629162 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150477561315 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555420215207 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495319906223 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943421006021 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385856044317 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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