You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
- Introduce yourself
- Say why you are making this trip
- Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear John,
It is very kind of you allowing Sarah, my cousin to put me in contact with you and offer to be my tour guide when I reach Finland. Let me firstly introduce myself, I am Adriane and I am currently in my final year of studies. Currently I am planning on my graduation world-tour trip before beginning my career.
As part of this exciting trip, a trip to experience the World’s nature when I’m young, I have chosen Finland as my starting point in upcoming Christmas period. I have long desired to endure aurora experience in Finland. You would not be able to find aurora such unexpectable and mysterious, natural scenery in Hong Kong.
I have partaken researches on Finland including local attractions, cuisines and weather. To make this trip more worthwhile, would you be able to recommend culture experiences that I should attend to. Further, past climate records show Finland would drop below -25oC in Winter, uncertain I could purchase a good quality winter-proof coat in Hong Kong, would you be able to advice which will be the best store to get this and what other things should I bring?
Thank you for all your advices in advance and I couldn’t wait to meet you in Finland.
Best Wishes
Adriane
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83568075117 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71471946594 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3630098811 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16403865697 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628637676725 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564542555657 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113646960858 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04917572628 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.