It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Child's career is the major debatable issue today. Although people claim that inbuilt talent is responsible for children's career, I believe that anyone can achieve anything if he/she is given the right training at the right time. This essay discusses both the views and my own perspective.
Talent to perform certain tasks in children is in-built and therefore it is very easy and interesting for them to do the job. For example, a girl with a pleasant sound can sing very well. Likewise, a boy with strong legs and arms can become a well-known athlete. In contrast, unfortunately, some children are lack of such God gifts such as nice look, sharp brain and eyes and so on, which makes them nearly impossible to succeed in life.
However, students can be taught anything irrespective of its difficulty with proper training and practice. For instance, blind students can be taught reading with correct guidance. Moreover, Identification of strength and searching for the right opportunity are the two keys to achieve success and teacher is the best person to help with this. A student who is weak in the study may be inspired to take part in sports based on his/her passion. In addition, interest and understanding of a subject perform an essential role. This inspires and helps children to understand the topic thoroughly and work diligently. With the hard work and passion, even deaf child can play guitar and keyboard.
To conclude, I think persistence and interest are significant reasons for the success of children rather than their talent. Therefore, I completely agree that a child can be taught to become successful in any field with thorough training.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05434782609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74983291773 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5347453988 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288245988709 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845088327353 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553578834435 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158444937287 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255027678152 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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