Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
It is the dream for every human being on earth to buy their personal shelter. This leaves people two choices whether to go with an apartment or to buy a personal house such as a villa or bungalow. Even though the house seems a better choice, it may have certain downsides as compared to apartments. This essay discusses the positives and negatives of living in a house followed by my own opinion.
Living in the house has been the first preference historically for people in most of the cases. The cogent reason behind is the space it provides. A person can have an ample amount of facilities such as a private garden, gym and swimming pool in the house such as a private villa. Also, they are more spacious and spread over the large area which is not possible in case of apartments. In terms of the basic utilities such as gas pipelines, water storage and supply system, electricity and so on, bungalows are independent from others whereas apartments have all those in common among all people.
On the other hand, the house can be proved costly as compared to the flat. The flooring area which house provides is almost half of which apartment gives at the same price. Also, the availability of large bungalows is very rare in the populated cities like Mumbai and therefore most of the celebrities and aristocratic also live in the opulent apartments. In addition, Children, as well as adults, can find people of same age group and hobbies and therefore healthy communities can be developed easily in case apartments. On the contrary, people who live in the house prefer private life. Besides that, at least two families live on the same floor in flats which feels extensively supportive in the case of an emergency at home which is not possible in a private house.
To conclude, I think that living in a house has both merits and drawbacks. Although living in a house can have more space, personal amenities and private life, it seems an expensive choice with a lack of community support. Moreover, House is the almost unavailable choice in major cities. Therefore, according to me, living in a house has major disadvantages as compared to advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, at least, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78609625668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6560265101 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521390374332 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1889044872 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2105263158 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319954811115 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101988089282 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081785092581 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204863077571 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620886788229 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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