Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Possessing a satisfying accommodation is the dream of every person in my country as people consider it as a status symbol. Well, it depends upon the perspective of the individual to choose the type of residential dwelling according to their requirement. The essay will discuss the benefits and hindrance of living in a house over an apartment.
The greatest benefit of having own house is the area, size, design layout, interior and privacy according to one's satisfaction and these are considered on priority over others. People can design their house as per the purpose to be fulfilled. For instance, generally, people prefer a small store in the house or carry out construction any time that cannot be seen in an apartment. Besides this, an independent house is easily disposable rather than an apartment in high rise building.
The main challenges of living in a house is the lack of security, various amenities, high maintenance and hidden cost and also quite expensive to afford. Apart from this, an apartment is equipped with all the facilities with no worries of maintenance, cleaning or gardening. Todays living in flats are on the rage as working partners priorities the security of their family, having security guard for twenty-four hours, security alarm and CCTV in the area. At the same time, the availability of necessary commodities at one phone call provides a satisfactory lifestyle. For example, when I lived in a house I usually tried to avoid to go the gym because it was 1km away from my house but since I moved to the apartment it is quite manageable to join it every day.
To conclude, it wholly depends upon the size, circumstances, choice of family to live in. The essay discussed both the pros and cons of living in a house instead of an apartment. In my opinion, indeed, as per today's lifestyle apartments are more convenient and secure than house for nuclear families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'satisfying accommodation'.
Suggestion: satisfying accommodation
Possessing a satisfying accommodation is the dream of every person in my coun...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...yout, interior and privacy according to ones satisfaction and these are considered o...
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Line 9, column 627, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
...n I lived in a house I usually tried to avoid to go the gym because it was 1km away from my...
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Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...partment. In my opinion, indeed, as per todays lifestyle apartments are more convenien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95638629283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88232878374 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1265676323 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316708093279 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102157077722 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764612445278 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193319151923 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522553957671 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.