Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being popular is the dream of everyone's life and persons make persistently innumerable efforts to gain recognition. Along with the benefit of incredible image, the life of celebrities is also associated with risk. This essay will discuss the benefits of being famous and also the complications they face which are negligible compared to the benefits.
Fame is one of the reasons for being successful in life and almost people have desire to attain such position that make them distinct from the crowd. Achieving popularity is quite easy rather than maintaining it to live long in spite of various hurdles. One of the benefits of being famous is that celebrities are vulnerable to a plethora of experiences at a very little span of time that help them to face upcoming challenges and problems.
In addition, obviously, the source of income and powerful contacts make sure their life stable. For example, despite having a middle-class family background of Sachin Tendulkar, once he got the recognition he overcame all his problems and have numerous benefits life long.
Although, It has some problems associated with the life of celebrities as media keep an eye on every step of these people to collect content so it is quite difficult to keep privacy. As a lot of risk is linked to the image of well-known persons. The idea that gaining popularity results in danger is completely preposterous as risk is involved with everyone whether he is famous or not.
To conclude, successful persons have enormous benefits compares to struggle. The essay argued that celebrities life is full of ups and down in respect of image and rage. In my opinion, being a celebrity is absolutely beneficial despite having some risks that are imperative acceptable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it is quite difficult to keep privacy. As a lot of risk is linked to the image of...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...ares to struggle. The essay argued that celebrities life is full of ups and down in respect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14930555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85144503923 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0523270226 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205320209494 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671287790279 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420340360141 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111989216863 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435038179636 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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