Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being in lime light and enjoying celebrity status is dream come true for many film stars and sports personalities. In my view becoming center of attention is a sword with two edges. Any imbalance may turn life of a person from what so called as ''celebrity'' to down to rags. Benefits of such lifestyle are considered to be name, fame and money but along with luck it might bring some inconveniences, like lack of personal space in life, precautious behaviour, unnecessary attention of media etc. Let's pool these thoughts together to know which outweighs what.
Movie stars, athletic champions, political activists are always guiding compass to every society. Their personal choices, tastes, actions were always immitated by society. We all know how advertaisment companies pay huge amounts to these celebrities for hiring them as product brand ambassadors. In countries like India films heroes are worshipped like gods and sometimes even build temples. For many sports lovers cricket is religion and cricketers are heroes. Moral and social support for celebrities are added advantage along with financially promising career.
However, these all are only one side of the coin. Misbehaviour and financial indiscipline might turn all above mentioned circumstances into dust. A small mistake in life of commoner for instance littering in public space may become target for media if it's case of celebrity. Statements on sensitive issues may damage life of public figure permanently. Image built for life long might be destroyed in seconds. Gossips haunts personal life if not well informed to their relatives and friends. Neverending media focus, for hot breaking news will effect personal and social relationships.
Nevertheless, well managed behaviour is always garnered by public and infact become foot steps for future generations. Psychological strength and managing status quo of emotions plays key role in smooth lifestyle of celebrity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4701986755 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86363351573 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67880794702 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9584482424 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150802747875 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389979220193 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503927084763 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849771344343 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714587190263 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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