Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. others say it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The personality development of children is quintessential, however, the use of leisure time by them is debatable. Some people think that engagement in team activities is effective while others do not. This essay will discuss both sides of arguments in detail and provide evidence why organized work is superior.
Besides, the affectionate nature towards the children it is extremely necessary to encourage them to take participate in group activities in order to teach them various skills such as coordination, patience and communication. Proper utilization of free time should be made by engaging children in several team operations. For instance, dance, music, band performance, skit and many others.These measures not only provide amusement but also develop a plethora of skills along with academic achievement concurrently. Apart from this, it is helpful to accentuate the hidden talent as well as provide a platform and better opportunities for professional growth.
On the other hand, some people think children should carry out activities whatever they want. It has its own pros and cons as sometimes, a depressed and alone child can indulge himself in harmful activities. Today in the world of technology particularly talking about this generation, it is everyone piece of cake to operate and involved in deadly activities, for example, a famous blue whale game took the life of many children. Despite this it probably advantageous for them as they learn how to deal with the situation and able to get the way to tackle the problems. This is the actual lesson of life to be a successful person. Also, it is well said that everyone should spend at least 10 minutes for themselves from the entire day to maintain inner peace and level of satisfaction.
To recapitulate, the proper balancing of leisure time is quite necessary to get fruitful outcomes. This essay discussed both views and I will consider the group activities are more beneficial as it leads to huge benefits unlike spending time alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
... band performance, skit and many others.These measures not only provide amusement but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, such as, talking about, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26234567901 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99150826574 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.354924653 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221072324003 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067399658146 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495188568584 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127012270559 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105442838833 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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