You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern for the sports and leisure centre that is being considered to be closed. I show my gratitude for this facility as almost all the members of society get benefits from here. Me with my friends visit every day to play games and take participation in several sports activities that helps to accentuate our talents.
Furthermore, society celebrates various festival here together that help to develop a relationship. Also, grandparents along with their children visit regularly in order to spend some quality time with each other. Beside this centre facilitates a plethora of indoor games that amuse adolescent and keep them active as well.
There would be adverse consequences of such a decision, as spending time here become the lifestyle of people of society.
Secondly, there is no other alternative that provide such facilities in the community, it will affect the lives of all the members.
I request you to take supplementary steps for the sake of community.
Hopefully, you will consider the matter on priority.
Looking forward for changes.
Yours sincerely
Mika
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28415300546 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82127077992 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693989071038 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4097065278 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125291815936 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462349045914 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444650407512 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443255469796 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365868034592 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.