Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to pollution in the environment and the other natural effects such as global warming, public health is one of the most contentious issues nowadays. Although the increase in the number of sports programs may captivate people, other health-conscious programs are required to create a large influence and improve public health. This essay discusses how sports centres and programs may help and then I will conclude about the sports the only necessity.
Sport is the basic necessity that must be a part of daily life. Therefore, the availability of the sports centre near home can have an accountable impact on routine life by regular sports involvement. For example, most of the people are lazy about going because of the far distance between the home and the centre or playground. So, easy access to such centres would encourage people to take part in various sports or at least do the exercises every day. As a result, the positive effect of sports would be reflected in the healthy lifestyle of the community.
However, sports is not adequate to improve public health. For example, Children and adults may go to the sports centre, but, what about elderly people? They cannot play or do exercises independently. Therefore, apart from that, there must be some facilities such as general body checkup programs at free of cost. This might be helpful for everyone. Also, doctors may promote healthy diet and advice precautions and specific diet plan in special cases. Also, free seminars about good or bad practices about routine life and the detrimental effects of unhygienic outside food would create an immense effect. This will inspire people to implement the best practices such as punctual lunch and dinner, daily yoga, physical exercises and so on. Moreover, this may also change the preference for outside food and eat hygienic and authenticated food.
In conclusion, I think sports facilities may improve public health, but other things are required to encourage and educate people prior to that. Therefore only increasing in the number of facilities won't create any impact on the public except sports friendly community. Other campaigns and health check-up programs are essentials to redirect people towards a healthy lifestyle.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21270718232 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66657016425 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.178550275 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.35 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274300455271 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876096504319 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837176868247 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184069255552 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656469604468 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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