You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
1. Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3. Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Himadri,
It was a pleasure to receive your letter last week. Good to note your wellbeings. You had asked for my advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. In my opinion, you should try for a job. I would like to list down my reasons for it.
At first, I will mention why you should not go to college. Since you have been living in a different country, the funding for your studies would be solely on your shoulders. Hence currently it would be a burden on you. And other reasons would be these days no one substantially attends colleges, so it would be boring to attend all alone.
Secondly, you have been learning a new foreign language French and also achieved certain certificates during high school. So with the help of that expertise, you should further explore it by taking up a job. You would also get an opportunity to earn handsome money as well as entry into a good network with experienced people.
Lastly, I would like to suggest you the kind of roles you can apply for such as translator, teacher, interpreter, etc. You could learn few more skills also while working. In conclusion, I feel you should try to get a job for these reasons. I wish you my best wishes and good luck.
Yours Faithfully,
Preeti
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Himadri, It was a pleasure to receive your letter...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...dies would be solely on your shoulders. Hence currently it would be a burden on you. ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes and good luck. Yours Faithfully, Preeti
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.503721453 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4900697982 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4705882353 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337880343856 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114602896892 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955771644824 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209149869559 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979190436927 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.