Dear Mike,
I hope all is well with you and your family. I have got your letter and hope I can help you with your problem.
Regarding your question on finding a job or going to college, I would suggest you first find a good-paying job. As you already mentioned in your letter that your family is on a huge loan and no one is there in your family to help you. If you join the college, the condition will get worse. As a result, you would not be able to concentrate on your study and unable to enjoy.
To pay the debt of your family and earn enough money for your study, I want you to find some job. Once you get a job and clear the existing burden of a family loan, then you can join college. It will not only help your family but also quite relaxing for you.
It would be better if you could find an accounting and finance-related job. As you want to pursue your career on the finance sector, it will definitely help you in the future. Further, this kind of job offers a higher salary.
Do let me know if you need any other help from my side.
Your friend
Tom
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r help from my side. Your friend Tom
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, then, well, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13875598086 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15056734496 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540669856459 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3932063677 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7857142857 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292466061062 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118678962759 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348336670369 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162729844824 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066167998978 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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