You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job.
write a letter to this friend in you later
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him or her.
Dear Suhana
Hello, how are you? I hope letter of my mine finds you in a good health. I am writing this letter in response to your previous epistle in which you asked me about my recommendation for using one option between further study and join any profession.
I personally believe that further study would not be suitable for you due to plethora of reasons. First of all, it would cost you a high amount and also hinder your growth, as you have already completed your masters in Business Administration and if you would select any course for study it will not give you a fruitful results.Moreover, you would not be able to handle your expense and need to cut down your spendings on different things and also cause Boredome in your life.
In contrast, doing job will give you a better chance to explore new opportunities and will also be helpful to attain practical knowledge. In addition, you will become self dependent and would be able to support your family financially. Besides this, your capabilities and your knowledge about the subjects are extraordinary and it would give you a chance to find white collar job in top managing companies. Furthermore various job vacancies has been published in a newspaper on a daily basis and you can easily find a better job place which can further promote your creativity.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon and pay my regards to your parents.
Yours truly
Niasha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Suhana Hello, how are you? I hope letter of my ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rther study and join any profession. I personally believe that further study w...
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Line 6, column 321, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...r study it will not give you a fruitful results.Moreover, you would not be able to hand...
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Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...it will not give you a fruitful results.Moreover, you would not be able to handle your e...
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Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d not be able to handle your expense and need to cut down your spendings on diffe...
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Line 8, column 408, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...e collar job in top managing companies. Furthermore various job vacancies has been publishe...
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Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...our creativity. I am looking forward to hear from you soon and pay my regards to you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81451612903 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73560702325 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9230223143 44.8134815571 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224612505653 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980364199258 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381810521018 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149538776846 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414129516129 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.