Your friend who lives in another city has opened a new shop and you are unable to attend the inauguration due to some important competition you are part of
write a letter to your friend. In your you must congratulate your friend
explain your inability to attend
mention that you will visit soon
Dear Mira
Hello! how are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am inscribing this missive to give my heartiest felicitation for your new shop which you have opened recently and also want to say sorry for unable to attend your opening ceremony.
I am very glad that you have proved your capability with your dedication and passion, as you always wished to run your own business and I think this new venture has accomplished your dreams. I will feel very proud to see you as a successful businessman in future. However, I was not able to come on your auspicious day because of some inevitable reason, actually on the same day my company has organised inter-department competition which was mandatory for every employee to attend.
I have seen some pictures of your new shop which you have posted on Facebook and it seems very attractive and well organised. The interior decoration is marvelous ,which creates a beautiful ambience and enhance the glory of your undertaking. Moreover, I have seen some items which my mother had bought from your shop and it increased my excitement to visit your place.So, next week when my employer grant me a leave, I will definitely visit your place to buy something good for me as you know I am very shopaholic person.
I am looking forward to meet you soon and I wish your business will flourish day by day and you will have longest of customers.
Yours truly
Treno
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mira Hello! how are you? I hope you and your ...
^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Mira Hello! how are you? I hope you and your family are...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble to attend your opening ceremony. I am very glad that you have proved your ...
^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w venture has accomplished your dreams. I will feel very proud to see you as a su...
^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... to see you as a successful businessman in future. However, I was not able to come on you...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed. The interior decoration is marvelous ,which creates a beautiful ambience and e...
^^
Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...eased my excitement to visit your place.So, next week when my employer grant me a ...
^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...paholic person. I am looking forward to meet you soon and I wish your business will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.732 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67910731401 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4529852146 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417333115734 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18936650192 0.0766984524023 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875857471474 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281865581598 0.12726935374 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721205522499 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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