Dear Nancy,
I received your letter yesterday asking for my advice on whether to go to college or try getting a job. Thank you for considering me to be able to give you an appropriate advice. I assure you that whatever I am going to ask you to do will be best for you and your future.
As you are aware, I had opted to enroll for college last year considering it will help me in my career. However, just like you, I had little interest in studies. As a result, I failed in various subjects which led to a lot of demotivation in me. I feel college would not be an ideal option for you as I do not want you to go through similar stress while studying theory because I know you are way too good in practicals.
Getting a job will give you an opportunity to use your practical skills and help in gaining a job experience earlier than everyone else. This will give you an upper hand among others in the corporate world and build confidence to face competition. The best part is that not only will you be able to earn good money, but also be able to take care of your expenses and save for your future.
Considering your good communication skills and computer knowledge, I think that administrative and secretarial jobs would be ideal for you. There is a website by the name 'Jobseek' that provides jobs related to Administration throughout the city. You should definitely check that out.
I hope you find my suggestions helpful. Please let me your progress on this.
All the best.
Warm Regards,
Priya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'appropriate advice'.
Suggestion: appropriate advice
...r considering me to be able to give you an appropriate advice. I assure you that whatever I am going ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, i feel, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 276.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64557268288 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0160194763 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0588235294 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315677944894 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101015765216 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100385515832 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185879506726 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101833966922 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.