You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. I’ve received your letter about the dilemma you are facing with regards to pursuing higher education or getting on-board with a job. While going to college is definitely a great idea, I personally think you should consider starting your professional career.
Although college gives us good friends and cherishable memories, you would be overwhelmed with the amount of assignments that you are expected to complete within the stringent deadlines. Also, you are not someone who’d love to stick to the schedules and stay organized so I think you should rather work towards securing a job.
While professional experience sometimes make you vulnerable and miserable with the kind of expectations your supervisor sets for you, it definitely gives a peace of mind and help you stand on your own feet in the long run. Financial independence that you can achieve while working is incomparable to any other alternatives.
As you are tech savvy and someone who enjoys solving real-life challenges, I’d suggest you to opt for Data Scientist roles. Data Science is an emerging domain with tons of opportunities and I am sure that you are going to excel at this domain.
Wishing you good luck
Your friend
Shyam
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12621359223 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77646139251 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1225940632 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298613564852 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118359064708 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507609247566 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154521504479 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769582647748 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.