Dear Marie,
I hope you are doing splendidly well. I am deeply sorry for the late response to your letter as you know I am on a working trip and I do not usually check letters. I am writing regarding your question about either continuing your education or going for a job is a good idea to follow for you.
I believe commencing a job would be entirely a better option for you to follow based on two potent facts. First of all, As you have told me earlier your sister and you reside in a rental apartment and you are responsible for covering all living expenses such as rental fee, shoppings and other things. If you have the intention to study in a college you should pay at least $CAD 2000 for each term which is not affordable for you.
On the other hand, if you work you can earn an income and live better. In other words, with your salary, you can cover most of your expenses. As far as I am concerned you are not a studious person and you are not interested in studying so it would be a complete waste of time for you.
My friend Marie, As I know you have the experience of working in a restaurant for almost 5 years as a waiter. I think you can go to this in one of the local restaurants in your neighbourhood. I assume you like this job as you need to be in contact with other people and you are sociable and welcoming.
For any helps you can always count on me.
update me with your latest plans.
Wish you the Best
Love,
Hiva
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ob is a good idea to follow for you. I believe commencing a job would be entir...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udy in a college you should pay at least 2000 for each term which is not affordab...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Update
... any helps you can always count on me. update me with your latest plans. Wish you th...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th your latest plans. Wish you the Best Love, Hiva
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, well, at least, i think, such as, you know, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20788530466 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3472625436 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6082204681 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276176205652 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107425708941 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048174134062 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14299775727 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709956082734 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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