Novels and Tv shows with the topic of crime are mostly selected to read or watch by a host number of people in various countries. It seems to me, these kinds of books or tv shows gain popularity since they have a controversial issue and exciting plot to follow. Actually, in my point of view watching a show on tv or read a book under the theme of crime does not appeal to be a logical activity to follow based on some valid as well as reliable reasons.
To put a light on the potential reasons why most people are eager to follow storylines with the primary subject of crime, let me commence my first point by focusing on the fact that people usually are fond of mysterious and unforeseen stories. thus they can easily reach their wishes by selecting this type of entertainment. My next point is about this truism that this sort of mentioned wanted activity has substance beneath its sheen. To put it clearly, these movies or books not only raise the public`s curiosity but also provide them with a clear idea of how experienced criminals commit a crime. Hence, they can enjoy and learn about novel subjects at the same time.
According to some reasons, I would not support the idea of chasing these kinds of activities. I believe, when we have wide access to these programs either in a form of a film or book, every people, including children under the legal age, may have put them in their reading or watching list. Therefore, this mentioned probable event could have an undesirable effect on children’s mind which is really against universal regulations. Along with this presented view, I am of the opinion that the spread of these movies or novels could present the act of criminals as normal as a routine activity. To clear this view. I add that committing a crime can be thought of as a normal activity in people`s perspective and this is entirely against the social health of communities.
By way of conclusion, Although I think these films or novels because of their nature have gained high popularity in public, I would highlight that this much availability to these programs could absolutely pose some problematic issues on the healthiness of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65789473684 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56157413515 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534210526316 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 380.0 20.2975951904 1872% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1770.0 106.682146367 1659% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 380.0 20.7667163134 1830% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 103.0 7.06120827912 1459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202041170526 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202041170526 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130905846834 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896828445596 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 190.5 13.0946893788 1455% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -305.76 50.2224549098 -609% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 150.3 11.3001002004 1330% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.77 8.58950901804 300% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 154.0 10.1190380762 1522% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 191.0 10.7795591182 1772% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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