Dear John Richard,
I hope this letter finds you well.
I am writing to express my interests in continuing my job in the head office of our company in Japan.
Actually, I want to resume my job in the head office based on two potent reasons. First of all, I want to gain more experience in the field of digital marketing and networking with the support of highly knowledgeable engineers there. I am certain as a talented and skilled individual this period of 6-month would be an improving factor to flourish our company marketing department. Along with this, with no question working in the area of the head office would bring me several beneficial aspects such as broadening my global perspective and advance my collaborative skills. Secondly, I have always had the dream of visiting Japan and this working trip would also make my dreams come true.
During this 6-month that I would not be present in the company for sure I am going to assign Ms. Lee to check staffs' performances in my department and please be certain that I would be reachable via e-mail and other social media in case my department in our company face any problematic issues. To add on, I would have a weekly meeting with my team to ensure the flow of work is neatly and flawlessly.
As I am familiar with the employer exchange program, the manager of every company ought to confirm the eligibility of the nominated employer for this program. I would be grateful if you could kindly provide this chance for me. Your direct permission would able me to follow this stream and the deadline is until the end of April third as you are entirely aware.
I am eager to earn your affirmative feedback.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 306.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7614379085 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.681533354 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7069878065 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272132080777 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889948527252 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450110676423 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135146249756 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389373546997 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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