Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing in response to your request as to whether it is best for you to take a job or enroll in a college course.
First off, let me say that I am delighted and honored to see your confidence in my opinion. But to the matter at hand, I strenuously insist that you take on a job for now because it will be more beneficial for you at this moment. As you know, I graduated from college a few years ago and struggled to secure a position for myself that was related to my field of study. So, I suggest not to waste 2 years of your life and a significant amount of money because there is a high chance you will end up in the same situation I was in.
Instead, by taking a job, you will be financially secure, and in a more suitable time, you can continue your education. As of what kind of job will be more lucrative, knowing your mentality and qualifications, I recommend taking a full-time vocation such as a broker job in transportation industry because it is convenient, salary-wise rewarding, and it does not need a college degree.
I hope you will be successful in your job hunt.
All the best,
Willie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... am writing in response to your request as to whether it is best for you to take a job or enr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as to, kind of, such as, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71028965137 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4571615639 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226959558255 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985790760215 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532424110702 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163893128317 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422183630218 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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