Dear Misha,
Hope this letter finds you in good mood. How is it going? I'm glad you've managed to write me about your choice whether to enter college or get a job. I'm writing to say that I sure you should get a job. Let me clarify this.
Entering the college is a pretty bad idea since we all knew that here in Russia unemployment among graduates is very high. Also, you should understand that you will spend at least 4 years of your life studying out of date information. That's what my experience says: old books with old knowledge.
Instead of this, you can already get an entry position in the almost every IT firm as you wanted. You just need to show your attitude to work and to your responsibilities. In addition, when your peers graduate without practice, you will already have a four-year-old experience. This is highly valued by employers.
Don't get me wrong, but I feel that you will become a really skilled programmer without wasting your time studying. You were always good at Math and other STEM subjects. Remember how did we like those tasks and experiments in Physics and Informatics? That's unforgettable for me.
Feel free to write me if you want to discuss this further. You can also call me (89261233434) or drop me an email (evgenyivashko@yandex.ru); please do not no call me after 21:00 pm because I have small children. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Evgeny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, at least, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72580645161 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85705900538 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1468706623 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264966012431 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789566734823 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778079600872 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15042035018 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867661326054 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.