You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Dear James,

I’ve recently got your letter and feel a bit disappointed that there is no opportunity to talk to each other more frequent. However, I’m very glad that you have finally graduated a high school and will start a new life soon. I think you need to take a break with your educational process and try to work for a while. There are more difficult subjects there and you will have caught up with studying and don’t have a free time at all.

By the way, there are a lot of programs provided by local companies in your city that aimed to employ predominantly youth. This is a good opportunity for you to try yourself working and, moreover, collect money for your forthcoming education. When you finally decide to study in college or university, you’ll have enough cash to pay your studying fees.

I want to advise you to buy some local newspapers. There are units with job advertisements. But first of all, you need to make an appropriate CV. Don’t forget to note your communication abilities. I think, consultant in supermarket is good job position to start with. Especially, in electronic department. This is your field.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you about job finding and wish you good luck!

Your sincerely,
Givi

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Average: 7.6 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you good luck! Your sincerely, Givi
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'by the way', 'first of all', 'to start with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181132075472 0.220444632235 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.181132075472 0.167888034529 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0754716981132 0.0606518309736 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528301886792 0.0506257000042 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0943396226415 0.118615021944 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0754716981132 0.107062808482 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0301886792453 0.041066498444 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83767218014 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0528301886792 0.0385302599488 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00377358490566 0.00132118243153 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641509433962 0.0714148451538 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00754716981132 0.0191574576366 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00754716981132 0.00930345855455 81% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1276.0 1141.60824742 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.134020619 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90740740741 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287037037037 0.284621296913 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226851851852 0.211203875043 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180555555556 0.133321485273 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12962962963 0.0843313296314 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83767218014 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 64.1254034691 62.8969750728 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.5 16.4300151701 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3022008996 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 90.9928171075 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.4300151701 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.613754768223 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.1851851852 37.5504026743 96% => OK
Elegance: 0.873563218391 1.13073093955 77% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334023650342 0.331212695627 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0482819371459 0.0927372745006 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0437157332295 0.0736520305886 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486663949334 0.579516596996 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184471830628 0.180689518051 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122683857646 0.122183219658 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967013968404 0.0765303033291 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30785661316 0.211926503985 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0612172034055 0.0737400523855 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245767919014 0.203819188451 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364359545094 0.067151250289 54% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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