You recently rented an apartment and you are quite happy with it but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter to the landlord about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell:
-Your appreciation of current condition -
-What is the renovation and why? -
-What is the benefits of your suggestion?
Dear Mr. Jones,
I hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. As you know, I am your tenant for the past two years, and I liked to live as a renter in your house.
I am glad to see some of modifications that you have made outside and inside the house. One is the plantation in the garden area and another is changing electrical appliances as they were getting outdated. However, there are some things required to refurbished your house to make it attractive to the neighborhood.
Since it is an old building, it requires to be painted from outside and inside as the house has not been painted over a decade. Moreover, the old furniture requires to be exchange with a new one which includes beds, sofas, and a dinning table.
All these changes will increase the value of your house. If you need a suggestion for colors that required for paint, I would suggest you to go for light and brighter colors. Not only it will make your house attractive but also colorful in the society. Moreover, you can visit to our local mall where an IKEA furniture shop is selling a furniture at a nominal cost because of ongoing festival sale. I hope that I have provided the suggestion you required to renovate the house in a full maintenance manner.
I am looking forward to hear a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Jones, I hope you are doing well by the grace o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the modifications') or simply say ''some modifications''.
Suggestion: some of the modifications; some modifications
...n your house. I am glad to see that some of modifications which you have made outside the house. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake it attractive to the neighborhood. Since it is an old building, it requires...
^^^
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'furniture'.
Suggestion: furniture
...where an IKEA furniture shop is selling a furniture at a nominal cost because of ongoing fe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...enance manner. I am looking forward to hear a positive response from you soon. Y...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61825726141 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58805432164 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9479991495 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290682153202 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960684894977 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638531395437 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146689176277 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956664476071 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Jones, I hope you are doing well by the grace o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the modifications') or simply say ''some modifications''.
Suggestion: some of the modifications; some modifications
...n your house. I am glad to see that some of modifications which you have made outside the house. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake it attractive to the neighborhood. Since it is an old building, it requires...
^^^
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'furniture'.
Suggestion: furniture
...where an IKEA furniture shop is selling a furniture at a nominal cost because of ongoing fe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...enance manner. I am looking forward to hear a positive response from you soon. Y...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61825726141 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58805432164 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9479991495 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290682153202 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960684894977 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638531395437 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146689176277 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956664476071 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.