You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late causing you to miss an appointment. Write a letter to the train company.
In your letter,
-explain what caused the delay in the journey
-tell them what happened because of the delay
-ask them for a refund
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding the yesterday's train journey, which was an awful experience in my life. Plus, I have attached the evidence of the trip which caused a delay in my traveling.
About the poor service, my plan was to attend a interview in the afternoon, however, I failed to reach on time due to the derailment of the train at Kingstone Street. Consequently, I was extremely unhappy with the service due to the above incident.
I order of unable to follow the yesterday's plan, my interview got suffered and I received rejection as I was not considered to reach on time. Plus, the complementary lunch was not been provided at the interview's location, as a result, I had to pay for my lunch expense which I was not planning to do as I would be suffering at the end of the month with limited budget.
Thus, I request you to kindly provide the refund that I had spent on my yesterday's train journey which has proven me for not been punctual, failed to get a job, and forced me to spend my money. And, I'm asking money-back from the London Railway.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the yester...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the poor service, my plan was to attend a interview in the afternoon, however, I ...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'was not' or 'has not been'?
Suggestion: was not; has not been
... on time. Plus, the complementary lunch was not been provided at the interviews location, as...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'interviews'' or 'interview's'?
Suggestion: interviews'; interview's
...tary lunch was not been provided at the interviews location, as a result, I had to pay for...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
..., and forced me to spend my money. And, Im asking money-back from the London Railw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, thus, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58373205742 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70910595099 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7107646262 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147835133218 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608956623952 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565943929891 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890490760333 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759446605714 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.