You recently went to Australia for a holiday However your return flight was delayed by a day Write a letter to the airline company In your letter Introduce yourself Complain about the delay Explain the problems that it caused you Ask for a letter of apolo

Essay topics:

You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed
by a day.Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter:
 Introduce yourself
 Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that it caused you
 Ask for a letter of apology and / or some form of compensation

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the problem that I encountered at the Sydney airport last Tuesday, 24th of July.

I am a recent customer of your airline who traveled to Australia for a 5 days holiday from 19th to 24th June and I was supposed to get back to work on 25th.

Due to the one day delay that happened and as a result of your poor service in informing the passengers about the delay, I missed an important meeting with one of my clients and it caused me a lot of inconveniences at work.

Firstly, based on my schedule I was supposed to travel to Tehran and negotiate some terms and conditions of a new contract between my company and one of the clients who is renowned all over the Iran and it was of high importance to me. Secondly, because of the one delay that occurred I missed my return flight to Tehran which cost me 240$. Finally, my girl missed a birthday celebration which was held in her school and had sentimental value for her.

I would like to ask for compensation, since all the consequences are caused by your airline. I am entitled to ask the costs of my return flight to Tehran as well as a letter of apology to my boss to whom you should explain and clarify the situation.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$240'.
Suggestion: $240
...y return flight to Tehran which cost me 240$. Finally, my girl missed a birthday cel...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d explain and clarify the situation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42386831276 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5901484331 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.355263965 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261827764023 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985929694946 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580966329545 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124082329 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722825401844 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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