You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a
day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
Introduce yourself.
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that is caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in orders to discuss about my flight last July 8 from Sydney Australia to Manila the Philippines. The flight, number 502B, had departure 18 hours with a delay. This issue was extended my trip for one and half days unexpectedly. I believe that it must informed to the passengers earlier to arrange their schedules. It was not a professional method of services to pressure oversea passengers and leave them with no alternatives. While it was my vacation and supposed to finish joyfully, I was under stressful moments thinking to my next domestic flight back home as well as my job.
I had to book another domestic flight which costed me extra charges during weekend. Unfortunately I was received a warning letter from my office to no be present on time after leave days.
That was a terrible and inconvenient traveling experience at all due to low customer service and irresponsible employees in checking counter of the airline.
I am considering an apologize letter which explain the disorganization. The company should compensate for all the issues and costs was caused to the passengers.
I am looking forward to having your quick respond.
Sincerely yours,
Jason JB
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'discussing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: discussing
...Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in orders to discuss about my flight last July 8 from Sydney...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ived a warning letter from my office to no be present on time after leave days. ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nter of the airline. I am considering an apologize letter which explain the disorganizatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99973332148 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9174675226 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169738875937 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529563435074 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374068935282 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853267336404 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048932073417 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.