You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Jamie,
Hope you are doing well and I trust this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am writing this letter to share my delightful experience about the flowers show named as ‘Brampton Blooms’ at Wills Road, started from February 27th, which I’ve recently visited with my family on last weekend.
Buddy, let me brief you about the show. As being an avid nature lover, it was indeed a boon for me to view the enchanting collection of a vast variety of floras. Moreover, the topiary figures were presented marvellously. Apart from this, the horticulture department of Brampton along with the collaboration with residents presented the whole event exquisitely.
Pal, since our college days, you have a great inclination towards gardening and nature, you will certainly admire this visit. Furthermore, as I vividly remember, you are seeking your career in landscaping, this is the place for you to get innovative ideas and enhance your knowledge in the art and craft of growing various species of plants.
My dear friend, I am planning to visit again this coming weekend, it would be really great if you will join me. Because a large area is covered by this show, I think it’d take a whole long day and to add up to your information this exhibition will last only for 3 weeks. Hence, please hurry up a bit in deciding and share details at what time I can pick you so that together we can enjoy the whole event.
Please reply as soon as possible.
With love,
Jenny
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reply as soon as possible. With love, Jenny
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79770992366 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58265834338 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1618282164 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276761577271 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765763321024 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570972145223 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123279816947 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786893856708 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reply as soon as possible. With love, Jenny
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79770992366 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58265834338 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1618282164 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276761577271 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765763321024 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570972145223 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123279816947 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786893856708 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.