Dear Pooja,
Hope this letter finds you and your family in the best of health and spirits. Recently, I visited City Square Mall with my children and was quite amazed to see that they have build up a stage for different shows by various artists from all over the world. They have occupied the atrium and converted that little space for kids entertainment.
Last weekend, we went to the shopping mall for our regular groceries unaware of the fact that the mall had decided to entertain kids while parents shop peacefully to boost their sales for June holidays. As these artists perform on weekends only, the place is over crowded. However, my kids insist to visit again on this coming weekend and are extremely thrilled to watch their favorite characters perform live. This event is best suited for age groups of 4 to 12 years old. Therefore, I was wondering if your kids would like to join this weekend?
Do let me know should you be keen to join us the next weekend, so that we can plan accordingly. Looking forward for your prompt response.
Warm wishes,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71957671958 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32120207219 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708994708995 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4716373603 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158815321383 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621540707896 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642227110177 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106522194206 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102783030683 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.