You saw an advertisement recently and bought the advertised product. Upon receiving the product, you discovered that the information in the advertisement was incorrect. Write a letter to the person responsible for the advertisement and say:
• What is the product
• Which information in the advertisement is incorrect?
• What do you expect the person to do about it?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your new product. Last month, I visited your store on Bagdad Street to buy your new crack cream for feet. Nowadays, the advertisement of this products has been published on not only TV but also the Internet. It is possible to see your advertising posters in many districts of Istanbul. You promised that this cream has no side effect through your advertisement.
However, on applying the cream, the crocks had increased for me. Not only that, the cracks became so deep and started bleeding. Thus, I had to make an appointment to dermatologist and pay 350 Turkish Lira for medication. Furthermore, my best friend complained your production as well.
This product didn’t help us and it made out feet worse. I would request you to reimburse the money not only for product bought but also for medical examination. If required, I can return back the product and I can also bring the invoice of treatment.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or feet. Nowadays, the advertisement of this products has been published on not only...
^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...medical examination. If required, I can return back the product and I can also bring the in...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93352751367 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8434110538 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217253822269 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668460409223 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548347441083 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115832043567 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483534176583 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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