Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement in the local newspaper about skiing course that you are offering this winter. At first, when I came across the ad, I was excited to join the sessions, as I do not a convenience of attending such course in my country. But, unfortunately, I would not be available for some of the classes at the end. Please allow me to elaborate.
Being a resident of India, I have certain visa constraints owing to which I can only stay for a period of 3 months, which is a month lesser than the duration of classwork. Consequently, I may miss a chance to attend the practice lectures which will happen during the final phase of the training.
Therefore, I want to know if there is an alternative to this issue: may be extra classes or a crash course could help. If that’s not possible, can I get a refund for the sessions I am about to miss? Or, any valuable suggestion that can fix my situation is much appreciated.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jonathon
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rtunately, I would not be available for some of the classes at the end. Please allow me to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60317460317 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84441609963 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8584344924 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239348589584 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734247699221 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635173696514 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110174384156 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570825981843 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.