You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to enquire about the advertisement about the new tennis course in Bath, England but before signing in I would like to clear certain quires.
I am very curious about learning tennis hence I decided to join the course at your institute. As per the advert, the course length is of three months. I will be free from my class next week therefore, I am intended to join this course after that.
Unfortunately, I cannot complete the whole course because I have booked my ticket to my home country as I have to attend my sister’s marriage. I will be coming back after one and a half months approximately.
I would like to enquire what is the course fee. Either I will get a refund from my fee if I attended only a month's course. Also let me know, the documents required for applying for the course if I am eligible.
Look forward to hearing from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...fee if I attended only a months course. Also let me know, the documents required for...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59036144578 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59257400604 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3230394634 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271577700348 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102698398284 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458624011321 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133964981483 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362713469194 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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