You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden which has caused some troubles to your life Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter you should say who you are and why you write this letter explain the prob

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. Write a letter to your neighbour.
In your letter, you should:
- say who you are and why you write this letter
- explain the problems
- give your suggestion on how to solve the problems.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:

Submitted by anhlnt16 on Fri, 05/01/2020 - 08:58

Dear Sam,
This is your neighbour David and I drop this line to talk about your dog Lisa, who has caused some troubles to me and my family.
Considerate as you are, you have already asked your niece Lily to take care of the dog when you are away. However, I do not think that Lily is doing a good job. Lisa is left alone most of the time with no adequate food and water, resulting in her excessive barking, which annoys me and almost everyone around the neighbourhood. Worse still, Lily only comes every other day, which means the little cutie often has to be confined to the house for a whole day. This, again, causes her to bark even more.
I was wondering if you could ask Lily to come and look after Lisa on a daily basis next time. Or, if she's too busy with her study, my little son Johnson can take over the duty.
You can call me when you come back so we can discuss this problem further.
Best wishes,
David

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...Lisa on a daily basis next time. Or, if shes too busy with her study, my little son ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uss this problem further. Best wishes, David
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22598870056 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96319351122 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706214689266 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.301732067 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253951240122 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858552430295 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103218969972 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164877292916 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923410466772 0.0580467560999 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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