You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You should write at least 150 words.You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain you

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain your situation
describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:

I am writing this letter to let you know that I would not be able to move into your apartment until September 2018. I am sure this will surprise you a lot but this the fact now.

As I discussed with you, I got the promotion last month and my company asked me to join the new office in Nottingham from April’18 onwards. Based on this development, I negotiated with you about the property and deposited the advance money. Even my both kids got their transfer certificate from school and stopped going to classes in the anticipation that soon they are going start in new school. Yesterday, I was informed that company has extended the inauguration date for opening the new office owing to terrorist attacks in London and plan to start the office shall be around August. Furthermore, I did reconfirm from HR about the new dates and have been told that dates are almost and invitations to the client have been dispatched so further postponement chances are very diminutive.

I understand that vacant flat is a loss for you as you would not get the rent, thereby, either you may search new tenant for flat or I can manage to pay you half of the monthly rent till July’18. I am happy to cooperate with you if you have any other idea to manage the situation.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,
JAMA

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... other idea to manage the situation. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61924686192 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64135734311 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8310218814 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376569312787 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149879924461 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113875074212 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24965996947 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109220817753 0.0580467560999 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.