You should spend about 20 minutes on this
You work for an international company, You have see an advertisement for a
training course which will be useful
Write a letter to your manage in your letter
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the con
could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Write at least 150 words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to let my interest known in participating for the upcoming training in play therapy. This would last for a period of 6 months. However, i would be needing approval in embarking on it.
The proffessional course would be taken place at Pretoria South Africa, it entails an overview cause for introducing play into the educational curriculum of pupils, especially those with autism spectrum disorder. Play is the basics of learning. This training commences on the 6th of June to 11th of December.
Requirements for this training includes a letter of recommendation for where i work, stating that it's relevant to my field basically because of the limited spaces available. A study leave with pay would also be appreciated because the venue of the training is not in the same country. Moreover, my years of service might not be qualified for a study leave with pay, although, i would love to be transferred to the company's branch at Pretoria temporarily if possible.
The newly opened section for learners with autism spectrum disorder as well as global developmental delay would greatly benefit from learning via play as their assimilation rate is low and reptition based on play would improve the cognitive part of their development.
Awaiting your favourably response.
Yours Faithfully,
Eniola.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-24 | prettychoice | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir or Madam, Im writing this letter to let my interest ...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...last for a period of 6 months. However, i would be needing approval in embarking ...
^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... a period of 6 months. However, i would be needing approval in embarking on it. The pro...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d for a study leave with pay, although, i would love to be transferred to the com...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2247706422 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93552536168 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1996643215 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9166666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15701845558 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605153779999 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355597271596 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834756196305 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323759469636 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.