You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to complain about the quality of meal I had at your restaurant last week. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am a regular diner at your restaurant therefore I had taken my family on a Easter dinner to your restaurant “The Impromptu". Although I have had a great dining experience especially in the alfresco part of the restaurant which provides a panoramic view of the lake however last week we had underwhelming experience. To begin with, despite of our reservation in the alfresco part of restaurant we will made to sit in the basement. additionally the food ordered was stale and bland especially the main course. Moreover the staff also seemed uncooperative despite of our request to change the meals.
Hence I would like you to take an appropriate action as it spoils your hotels reputation. As you are aware most of the diners put reviews about their dining experience online thus a bad review will have an effect on your business too. additionally I would also require a 50 percent discount on my next meal as a compensation.
I look forward to your response and hope you are able to improve next time.
Yours sincerely
Said
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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...rant therefore I had taken my family on a Easter dinner to your restaurant '...
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Suggestion: make
...the alfresco part of restaurant we will made to sit in the basement. additionally th...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...nt we will made to sit in the basement. additionally the food ordered was stale and bland es...
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Suggestion: additionally,
...nt we will made to sit in the basement. additionally the food ordered was stale and bland es...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...e and bland especially the main course. Moreover the staff also seemed uncooperative des...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... of our request to change the meals. Hence I would like you to take an appropriate...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on as it spoils your hotels reputation. As you are aware most of the diners put re...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...ll have an effect on your business too. additionally I would also require a 50 percent disco...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: additionally,
...ll have an effect on your business too. additionally I would also require a 50 percent disco...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to improve next time. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93557156894 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.854606675 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4166666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228737503037 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759084418106 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597716247872 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140116141061 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362335318702 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.