You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letterDescribe the situationExplain why you cannot continue your course at this timeSa

Essay topics:

You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter

Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue your course at this time
Say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to inform you that I will not be able to continue French language classes due to the below-mentioned reason.

As you are aware that I am working full-time at Zeta private limited and I had joined French classes to enhance my language skills to help me in interacting with my customers in France as it will help in bridging the language barrier. To elucidate recently my manager has resigned and the company management has decided to pass on his work-related responsibilities to me as they cannot find a suitable replacement within such a short span of time. The hiring process to fill this vacancy permanently will take around 3 months.

I had joined the evening classes as I was free in the evening and could dedicate my time but now due to this situation, I will not be able to find time as I would be occupied with a lot of projects.

Hence I ask you to please allow me to continue these classes after 3 months from where I left the course. If this is not possible then I would like you to refund the fee for the course.

I look forward to your immediate help on this matter.
Yours Sincerely
Mark

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... be occupied with a lot of projects. Hence I ask you to please allow me to continu...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48847926267 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66353068665 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9745846168 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299526166737 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11095997244 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457339140614 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151858015142 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544843334681 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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