Dear Mam,
My name is Kathrine Bell, I am a student of Genetic Counselling crash course that started two weeks before. I am writing this letter in order to ask you for my withdrawal from the course as i am facing some problems at my work place.
I am working as an Embryologist at We Care Hospital, and my timings are from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm. As you know the course starts at 5:30 pm, I get no time to freshen up and the routine gets very hectic. Travelling from hospital to the college is also quite chaotic due to peak hours.
I request you to consider my problems here and help me with the best solution, i am suggesting that if i can enroll my self in the October batch, that would really work for me. As my junior will be joining by then, I will be able wind up my day by 4:00 pm then.
I hope you understand my issues and help me in this situation. I will be waiting for your positive reply.
Thank you,
Yours Sincerely,
Kathrine Bell.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23369565217 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36301822914 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9374485173 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20037859349 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899046091976 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687928258385 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119673562454 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528083573748 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.