You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
- Give your reasons for wanting the job
- Explain why you think you can do the job
- Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to a recent advert for a local tour guide in the newspaper. I would like to let you know that I am interested in this job and would elucidate on the few points which make my candidature strong for this role.
To elucidate I am a local resident of Alwar and always had an ambition to be a tour guide and explain the importance and significance of famous tourist spots in our city to the visitors. Additionally, I have an in-depth knowledge of historical places which are now famous tourist spots in our city. I can explain the historical past of the beautiful forts and their rulers apart from this I can also correlate their significance as per the stories in our folklore thus I can allure them and make the session more knowledgeable.
In the past I have worked in the city museum as a tour guide where many historical artefacts are kept which represent the rich culture of Alwar additionally as you must be aware that the museum attracts tourists globally thus I have had experience of handling many foreign tourists which I believe will play a pivotal role in handling the job I am applying for.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Ben
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e strong for this role. To elucidate I am a local resident of Alwar and alway...
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...nd make the session more knowledgeable. In the past I have worked in the city mu...
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...ur immediate response. Yours sincerely Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73660458043 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.843023584 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.875 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217629092402 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894089542097 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288527697959 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116336124723 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399471843454 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.