You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office.In the letter
1. give your reasons for wanting the job
2. explain why you think you can do the job
3. describe any relevant experience you have
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you about your advert published in yesterday’s newspaper for a local tour guide for weekend duty.I am a student of mass communication and studying in last semester. To fulfill the requirement of financial aid towards my study I need to earn. In addition, my current company is on the verge of bankruptcy due to improper management.
First of all, I am well versed with multi-languages and communication skill. Moreover, I have experience of 2 years with my current organization. I am having an attractive persona, fluency in speech and knows about the culture of this country. I am a passionate reader who loves to read about values and ancient history of this country. These qualities make me the best suitable for this opening.
I have such relevant experience of this profile as I have worked as a tour guide for a company named festive travels. I am also seeking a new challenge and your establishments seem perfect company to work with if you hire me.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Sarah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...for a local tour guide for weekend duty.I am a student of mass communication and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86243386243 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02089065563 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624338624339 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1670141984 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225105641557 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820462924266 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883927931714 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157023064408 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747635856888 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.