You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letterexplain how you lost the cardask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
explain how you lost the card
ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,
I am a premium customer of your bank and have been satisfied with the excellent customer services and offers your bank offers. The purpose of this letter is to inform you about the loss of my credit card. Let me briefly explain the incident.

To elucidate the incident happened yesterday when I hired a taxi from my office. While paying cash to the driver I accidentally lost my credit card from my wallet as I was in a hurry however I realized this only when I reached home. Although I tried to call the taxi company to inquire if they had found out a missing card but unfortunately they had not recovered any such item. Eventually, with no options left, I had to call your customer care representative to block my card

Lastly, I request you to cancel my old credit card immediately and issue a new card as I need to use it for shopping as the festive season is around the corner.
Looking forward to your response and immediate help.
Yours sincerely
Saad

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a premium customer of your bank and...
^^^
Line 4, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mer care representative to block my card Lastly, I request you to cancel my old c...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se and immediate help. Yours sincerely Saad
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, however, if, lastly, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55367231638 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57524263341 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1780934534 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330662202902 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1143852917 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930558949734 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185770800519 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938163419045 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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