You want to apply for following job. Write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience would be necessary.
Dear Mr Moore,
I am writing in regards to express my interest in reference to your advertisement for the position of a waiter at your restaurant.
To elucidate I have a diploma in hotel management and have worked as a waiter at many restaurants in the past which helped me in gaining the right experience moreover it also helped in improving my communication skills while serving customers. Apart from this, I would like to highlight that I have a patient and calm personality which helped in handling difficult dinners at the restaurant who would always complain about the ambience and quality of food thus it resulted in appreciation from the customers and my reporting manager. Since I have worked with many restaurants in the past I have the knowledge of different cuisines and how those cuisines need to be served when ordered.
thus based on the above credentials I will be able to a perfect fit for this role and i look forward to an interview call from your side.
I am also attaching a copy of my curriculum vitae and cover letter for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr Moore, I am writing in regards to express my in...
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Dear Mr Moore, I am writing in regards to express my interest in reference to you...
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...osition of a waiter at your restaurant. To elucidate I have a diploma in hotel m...
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...uisines need to be served when ordered. thus based on the above credentials I wi...
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...es need to be served when ordered. thus based on the above credentials I will b...
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...able to a perfect fit for this role and i look forward to an interview call from ...
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...for your consideration. Yours Sincerely Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91333148645 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0473186976 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179485699866 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827494267191 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408020961021 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112513245096 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251392529233 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.