You want to sell your car. A friend of yours might want to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:.explain why you are selling the car..describe the car.say why it is a good idea for your friend to buy it.

Dear john

I hope you are doing well. It's been many days to hear from you. So here i am breaking the ice! I am writing this letter to tell you that i am selling my car in which you were always interested.

As you know I along with my family moving to Canada by next month. So i decided to sell this Swift desire. It's a model of 2017 so not very old. It's a diesel car so you don't have to bother much about petrol rates! Besides, it also give good mileage. All parts are in original condition. You will love the music system. Moreover, there are airbags for security reasons.

It's my first car so I want to sell to any known person and you also admired it. In addition to, it is in your favourite colour, white. You told me that you need a car. I invite you to come and have the test drive.
I will give it to you on negotiate price. I forget to mention that i will also give a vacuum cleaner with it and this offer is only for you.
I hope we will meet coming weekend.
Cheers
Sid.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...een many days to hear from you. So here i am breaking the ice! I am writing this ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...am writing this letter to tell you that i am selling my car in which you were alw...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in which you were always interested. As you know I along with my family moving ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mily moving to Canada by next month. So i decided to sell this Swift desire. Its ...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...So i decided to sell this Swift desire. Its a model of 2017 so not very old. Its a ...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e. Its a model of 2017 so not very old. Its a diesel car so you dont have to bother...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o not very old. Its a diesel car so you dont have to bother much about petrol rates!...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ch about petrol rates! Besides, it also give good mileage. All parts are in original...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e are airbags for security reasons. Its my first car so I want to sell to any k...
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Line 8, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have the test drive. I will give it to you on negotiate price. I forget to ment...
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Line 8, column 44, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ill give it to you on negotiate price. I forget to mention that i will also give...
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Line 8, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gotiate price. I forget to mention that i will also give a vacuum cleaner with it...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th it and this offer is only for you. I hope we will meet coming weekend. Che...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02525252525 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99982781628 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4716855119 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.8823529412 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6470588235 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299962096569 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829598282874 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065380471317 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152603851788 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1112024627 0.0580467560999 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.4 8.37731958763 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.91 8.71597938144 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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