Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope everything is ok with you and your family. Recently I am packing all my stuff at home as I am going to move to Water Road where nears to the college. Some of the stuff which i won’t pack away like television, fridge, and washing machine while those are too big to pack. But those are still usable especially the television. I think you would interested in it so I am wondering if you want to buy it.
The television which was bought last year and the model you were highly recommended is TG881. I bought the smallest size which is about 38 inch so that I can put it in my bedroom and I think it’s also fit in your bedroom. The condition of it is still considerable excellent. There’s not any scratch or stain on it. All the components are well equipped including the remote.
As you mentioned before that you wanted to buy a television for your bedroom, I think my television is an ideal and cheaper choice for you as you also like this model. If you are interested in, come to my home this Saturday to see and check it.
Looking forward to seeing you. Call me anytime.
Best wishes,
Kelly
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... Water Road where nears to the college. Some of the stuff which i won’t pack away like tele...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to the college. Some of the stuff which i won’t pack away like television, fridge...
^
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...ially the television. I think you would interested in it so I am wondering if you want to ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'inch' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'inches'.
Suggestion: inches
...ght the smallest size which is about 38 inch so that I can put it in my bedroom and ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Call me anytime. Best wishes, Kelly
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38028169014 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45394888908 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1144274566 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3125 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3125 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328000791251 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932911855192 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109789117001 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200451792142 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091851818586 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.