You want to sell your television.You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter explain Why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Soheil
Hi Soheil Dear, I hope you are okay when you want this letter to feel indescribable. Are your parents okay?I am sorry that I could not write to you sooner because of the difficult circumstances.
I have to tell you that I'm going to buy a TV. Of course, I bought my TV last year. But my niece threw a sculpture firmly on the television and the TV broke down.I want to use your unique information and buy a TV at a reasonable price and quality.
First I have to say that I have changed my home and moved to a bigger apartment. As a result, I need a bigger TV.I'd rather get a 5-inch curved TV with an internet connection feature.You know that I need to see different internet networks in my work and no longer have to use a laptop for that.
I beg of you every day and on any date you can set up so you can watch my favorite TV show and tell me its advantages and disadvantages.So I can make the best choice.
Best wishes
Sudabeh
Ps:I forgot to write my new home address. Address: Jordan Street, Not The Four Ways of Baby World
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Soheil Hi Soheil Dear, I hope you are okay when...
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...el indescribable. Are your parents okay?I am sorry that I could not write to you ...
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...umstances. I have to tell you that Im going to buy a TV. Of course, I bought ...
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...on the television and the TV broke down.I want to use your unique information and...
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...rtment. As a result, I need a bigger TV.Id rather get a 5-inch curved TV with an i...
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...rtment. As a result, I need a bigger TV.Id rather get a 5-inch curved TV with an i...
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... TV with an internet connection feature.You know that I need to see different inter...
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...ell me its advantages and disadvantages.So I can make the best choice. Best w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, of course, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32178217822 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57403369172 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8470231973 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233245569073 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818644461816 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752521056132 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12437641952 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969881662388 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.