Hi Peter,
How’s going? I am writing to regard my interest on boosting up my career to Germany where you have been doing well with your job. Our company will be closed after six months by this time I want to switch myself to a better place for a better life as well as bread and butter.
As a job seeker I have a very good expertise on my area of work. You know, after completion of my MS in Computing I have been working on my current company as a Software engineer for four years. By this time, I have got some other short courses related to the job from various national and international institutes. I hope you will go through the resume I am enclosing with this letter.
I know Germany is the great place for IT sector. As a software engineer the remuneration must be lucrative. I will be happy to know if you could give me some idea about the career, prospects and salary for the position I am hopping. I look forward to your reply.
Take Care
Sayed
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er life as well as bread and butter. As a job seeker I have a very good experti...
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Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmany is the great place for IT sector. As a software engineer the remuneration mu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31147540984 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40978030492 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8013191075 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166114081449 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528448130988 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451689181033 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108170238852 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234215797149 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.