YOu went to appear for an interview to another city by train. The train departure late from another station and could not reach at time.
write letter to railway officer
.explain when you travel and why train was late.
what happened as a result.
how you fel about the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the serious delay created at the Toronto train center by the local train last week on january 2nd.I was travelling to Halton region for an interview in the down town, but at Tronto station the railway staff went on strike and cause a long delay to next departurre. There was a small dispute between the staff and management, which took more than 2 hours to resolved.
This unexpected halt costs me my job. Due to late arrival, the job was awared to someone else who not even qualified as me. It ruined my career and future,because I passed the whole interview process and it was the last step of face to face meeting.
I am extremely disappointed and want to you to take immediate action to avoid such troubles in future or else I have to communicate to the city council.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...he local train last week on january 2nd.I was travelling to Halton region for an ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ed as me. It ruined my career and future,because I passed the whole interview process an...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52698437932 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70987654321 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5445943371 44.8134815571 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232016908865 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693532143288 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719130566225 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11834954054 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585052317614 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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