You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged Write a letter to the potential employer In your letter tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview da

Essay topics:

You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged.
Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter
tell them why you need to move the interview time
ask to change the interview date
explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

Dear Sir/Madam,

my self paras vadaliya and I have scheduled interview with your company by next week, but due to some inevitable situation, I would like to request reschedule it on some other day.

As per out latest email communication, I have to be appeared for face to face interview on next week 25th, but due to business exigency with my current employer, I need to travel overseas to Singapore till end of this month. Since this trip is utmost important and crucial and can not be postpone as we have to sign a contract with this potential client.

So considering above scenario, I request you to move my interview on starting of next month, around 2nd June at 11.00 am. I have every intension to appear for the interview as I always dream to work with this company. I am keen on role offering by this job and like to explore opportunity as its promise better future prospective.

I hope you will consider my request and help to reschedule interview on my suggested date and time. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
paras vadaliya

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, my self paras vadaliya and I have schedu...
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...equest reschedule it on some other day. As per out latest email communication, I...
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...ule it on some other day. As per out latest email communication, I have to be appea...
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... a contract with this potential client. So considering above scenario, I request...
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... promise better future prospective. I hope you will consider my request and h...
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...oking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, paras vadaliya
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...ng from you soon. Yours Faithfully, paras vadaliya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76595744681 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70139460655 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0927267019 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21300017554 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876459633313 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522952218578 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130907090493 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517317530069 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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