You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the services provided by your company. I have recently bought a scanner from one of your shops located in Surrey, BC. Although I was insured that the machine would work properly, after using it for two or three times I faced the followed issues that rendered the device completely inoperable.
Firstly, it was obvious that the aforementioned device had some difficulties connecting to the computer. Because there were several disconnections which consumed a few hours to be fixed by one of your technicians.
Secondly, I found out that the light bar stops moving, thus, scanning the whole document. Consequently, I had to visit our local shop to scan my documents which is an inconvenience.
Considering the mentioned problems and the fact that I work at home, the scanner that I bought from you caused a lot of damages to my work and reputation for I was late to deliver a few projects on time.
I would appreciate it if you could replace the scanner with a new one or reimburse the paid sum if there is no similar model available for replacement. Please feel free to contact me anytime if you need further information regarding this matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ifficulties connecting to the computer. Because there were several disconnections which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92237442922 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96906199356 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4357392153 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275940530227 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805618050286 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536805733639 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119684883486 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668235457685 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.